Parizellina

Hallo Parizellina, ik heb je artikel Gezondheidsportaal EU ter beoordeling aan de gemeenschap voorgelegd omdat ik het (in deze vorm) niet geschikt acht voor Wikipedia. Wellicht heb je er iets aan om de conventies door te lezen; daar kun je zien hoe een artikel eruit hoort te zien. Zie ook Help:Waarom staat mijn artikel op de verwijderlijst. Voor verdere vragen kun je altijd terecht bij onze helpdesk. Veel plezier op Wikipedia! Sonty (overleg) 18 jul 2011 14:45 (CEST)

Hello! I see that the article will be removed... For the copyright violations, I have the permission in the OTRS, ticket # 2011062210004646. If the article will be removed because it is cnsidered like an advertisement, please be assured that the Health-EU Portal has nothing to sell, it is the official health information portal of the European Commission. It is from European public authorities, not a company. My contribution was just intended to describe it, not to advertise it. I hope you understand. Concerning the tone, if this is the problem, I could do a shorter text, but it will take me time to have it translated... and the Health-EU Portal contribution might already be deleted. Let me know you feedbacks! thank you Parizellina (overleg) 19 jul 2011 16:10 (CEST)

Apart from OTRS and copyrights: there's the specific problem that the article is a bit too lyrical (starting off with the maker(s) is/are delighted to present etc). See Wikipedia:Neutral point of view on the English Wikipedia or WP:POV here on this topic. Please read also WP:NOT (English version: What Wikipedia is not). Regards Sonty (overleg) 19 jul 2011 18:45 (CEST)

Thank you for your message. I would change it immediately, but myself I cannot. I tried to arrange a bit the beginning, you are completely right about the lyrical bit. If it is still not ok by wiki standards, let me know, I will ask a friend who speak dutch. Thankyou, Parizellina (overleg) 21 jul 2011 11:06 (CEST)